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RenIchi - Well-secluded
Title: Well-secluded.
Beta: Hopelesslover23.
Pairing: Renji/Ichigo (Ichigo POV).
Rating: NC-17.
For: Goldensprite and Babyluw's birthday! I you guys thiiis much! >3>
Word Count: 2,120.
Warnings: Voyeur!

Summary: Renji's position at that desk might have been very authoritative had he not been stroking his cock at that moment.

A/N: This is all thanks to
Goldensprite and her amazing prompt. I can only hope I pulled it off. And that you two have an awesome birthday, fit for awesome chicks! (I would have pondered over two different pieces for you, but then I thought, what could possibly be better than Renji porn? More Renji porn! :P) Extra special thanks to Figaro_figaro for being awesome.

The night air of Soul Society was a lot chillier than Ichigo had expected. Considering the fact he'd been unconscious most of the nights he'd been there before the war, and this was his first visit after it, he could safely say that was the reason he was shuddering.

He could hardly call it a visit, though, as he was looking for one particular person for one particular reason, and then he would go back home. He hoped. Lingering around that place brought only bad memories, but one couldn't really escape one's best friends.

The closer he'd gotten to the 6th Division, the more distinct Renji's spiritual energy had become, and Ichigo began picking up the pace. However, he stopped short at the 5th's barracks.

Oh, right, guess he won't be in 6th anymore.

Ichigo was reminded of the reason he'd come there in the first place - to congratulate Abarai Renji, fucking Captain of the 5th Division. Of course, Rukia had managed to convince him to surprise Renji with a visit, which meant Ichigo now had to go look for Renji. At least the man - the captain - was never a very discreet person.

All Ichigo had to do was follow the intensifying reiatsu streaks until they were clear enough to make out, around… the captain's office. Ichigo didn't really know the place, but he remembered Rukia saying Renji had insisted on an office right in the middle of the barracks. She said he liked the noise, but Ichigo knew it was to get away from Aizen. He shook himself, and couldn't help but roll his eyes, just thinking about how Renji was going to rub his rank in.

Finally, Ichigo stopped on the wooden floor leading to the door of Renji's new office. He spotted a large window and opened his mouth to greet the man through it. However, his words (his breath, every thought he might have had) got stuck in his throat at the sight he'd stumbled upon.

There was one second, a fraction of it, when Ichigo was pretty sure he could have turned heel and left. He stayed for whatever damned reason, and from that moment on it had been a losing battle.

He was rooted to the spot, peering through a window into the unsuspecting captain's office. Well, Renji was definitely there. It was the state he was in that made Ichigo's throat go dry.

Renji's position at that desk might have been very authoritative had he not been stroking his cock at that moment.

Ichigo's eyes widened, and as he took in the scenario, well, he could only blame curiosity. The curiosity of a teenager led him to stare at Renji and assess every part of his form. Definitely.

Renji's head was tilted to the side, his eyes screwed shut and his neck stretched, skin taut and slightly sweaty. The tattoos there caught Ichigo's eye as he breathed hard, as though there wasn't enough air in the room despite the open window.

Fuck. Ichigo shouldn't have looked, shouldn't have even been there. It should have been inappropriate, disgusting even. It was. Why can't I stop?

Renji's eyelids started fluttering, and his breath picked up. Ichigo realized his was, too. He could see Renji's shoulders nearly shake, trembling while holding himself back from really moving, from pushing into his hand. His sharp teeth closed over his thin bottom lip, biting it almost viciously. Ichigo wondered whether it was to keep noises from slipping out, or whether Renji just liked it. Ichigo stopped wondering.

The chair made a creaking noise as Renji's hips jerked. He leaned his head back, and Ichigo's attention turned to his hair. It had been a very long time since Ichigo had seen it loose, and he had certainly never seen it quite like this; waves of violent red were spread on Renji's flushed face, sticking to his forehead and just barely touching his lips, spilling on the white haori just barely hanging on his shoulders.

Shit, he looked good in that. And fuck if he didn't know it. He was jerking off in his fucking chair, leaving Ichigo to wonder what was going through his mind. Ichigo stopped wondering again. He couldn't wonder--couldn't even think; lead by something completely different from his mind. He could feel shame and the kind of foulness he wasn't used to feeling, but they were drowned out by something primal, something… hot. He was caught so off guard, that for once, he let it go on. Just a few more seconds.

His amazed eyes traveled downwards, over Renji's strong arms and the tattoos twisting along them, but the large, wooden desk kept what his hands were doing from view. Ichigo's eyes caught what was on the desk, and his breath hitched in his throat again. Well, that explained the wet sound with each stroke.

Renji's mouth relaxed, as though he was especially pleased about something. He leaned back fully against the backrest, front completely open to Ichigo's gaze. He would have seemed relaxed if it weren't for his vehemently heaving chest, his head moving from side to side. Restless.

Each movement stretched his undone uniform over his broad shoulders. When it finally slipped off, the only thing interrupting the jagged tattoos all over Renji's torso was his brand new haori. Ichigo cursed silently again, forcing himself to swallow. It was too much on him, and he shouldn't, and fuck.

"Fuck…" Renji growled. For a moment Ichigo was sure he'd been spotted. He felt a jolt shoot down his spine, but Renji's gravelly voice had compelled him to stay, as captivating as the long, black lines on his body, and Ichigo had to stifle a sound of his own.

Still immersed in the sight offered--no, stolen by him, he refused to contemplate what he had been doing. Spying. Watching. Getting… Something seemed to happen and Renji cursed again, body quivering almost violently- Ichigo suddenly had to know exactly what Renji did. What he was doing to himself.

Ichigo started moving to get a better view, before he realized he was moving to get a better view, and halted. The action meant this wasn't simply happening to him. He was taking part in it. Horror swept over him in place of whatever the fuck had made him watch Renji in the first place, and in that moment of clarity he realized two things: he was clutching the windowsill so tightly it hurt, and he was hard.

Shit, shit. This was embarrassing, and had certainly never happened before. This reaction, this rush. Sure, he may have had some thoughts about guys, but never Renji. He thought. Maybe. (Maybe that was why he was paying attention to every little detail.) Either way, it was no excuse to just stand there and watch as Renji got himself off, despite what it was doing to him.

All rational thought escaped him yet again when Renji made a small, breathy noise. It could hardly be considered a moan; Renji's voice (Renji) was too coarse to produce such sounds. More like a desperate groan. Whatever it was, it went straight to Ichigo's groin, pulling him under the spell again. He hissed as quietly as he could, moving his hand to adjust his hakama.

Of course, the longer his eyes lingered on Renji - his neck stretched, his tongue peeking out to wet his lips, his back slightly arching off the chair - the longer his hand lingered there. He had to stop. He had to look away. He had to leave. He had to jerk off.

Along with rational thought went his inhibitions, and fuck, he had to. Ichigo was never much for holding himself back, but even under the haze of sensations he knew that that wasn't the explanation. He couldn't really blame Renji, either. It was all on him.

Biting his lower lip, he crouched slightly, loosening his sash to reach into the folds of his hakama. He didn't dare to blink, even as his hand wrapped around his cock for the first time. Maybe because he had to keep his guard up, or maybe because if he stopped looking the feeling would go away and he'd be left with voyeuristic intentions and a hand down his pants.

Fuck, he was so hard, and it felt… good. An exhilarating rush instantly swept over him, spurring him on. He was doing it outdoors, staring at another man doing the same, and it was pushing buttons Ichigo had no idea he had. Okay, maybe he was slightly attracted to Renji.

He shifted one last time to get a better hold of his erection, and refocused on Renji. Now he could see Renji's hand, and unconsciously assumed his quick pace, not looking away for a second. He could barely breathe, too overwhelmed by the whole situation - the depravity of it. The fact he didn't want to stop.

Finally, he looked directly there. Renji's hand was tight around his slick, big cock, his movements fast, decisive, powerful like everything about him. Ichigo should have guessed. He carefully leaned his head against the cool windowsill, though it did absolutely nothing to ease the heat coursing down his body. Nothing could have helped when Renji's hips started moving, so he was fucking his hand, while his other hand traveled even lower. Spellbound didn't cut it.

Another groan and Ichigo's eyes snapped back to Renji's face. He wasn't biting his lip anymore. His mouth was slightly open and let out a drone of quick breaths and sighs, and the occasional loud groan that made Ichigo curse silently and move his hand faster over his cock, focused on nothing but Renji.

Oh, Renji was squirming now. It was too much on both of them, and in a bizarre way they became synced. Renji started grabbing the haori mindlessly, tugging at the fabric over his chest as though he wasn't sure what to do with himself but couldn't care. Then his hand trailed to his hair, burying his fingers in soft-looking strands and pulling harshly. Ichigo nearly bit his tongue at the display, and tried to focus on his heavy breathing, on anything else so Renji wouldn't carry him off.

He knew he was being reckless, but he never did care about such things, especially not while being that turned on and taking care of it. His eyes flickered back and forth from his hand to Renji's. They were uttering the same curses, grunting out the same sounds. The air was too tight around him, too thick and heavy, as though he was sharing a breath with Renji.

The chair creaked some more when Renji really started writhing, the sounds leaving him more frequent and even less definable, and Ichigo knew what happened next, yet still had no idea. He knew he was too close as well, moving fast and hard and--fuck.

Just before Ichigo lost control over himself, he looked up, and his eyes locked with Renji's red ones.

Instead of spreading pure panic, the unexpected rush made everything burn hotter, and Ichigo let out a far too loud and indecent sound. The eye contact made Renji seem a hairsbreadth away, and Ichigo's body began convulsing to the vision of Renji's big hand on Ichigo's cock and the other man uttering his name.

He let out another groan as the waves hit him hard, draining him of everything for one blessed moment. All too soon, the cool, silent air brought him back. His hand finally stilled on the too sensitive skin, and frankly, he was too afraid to look up.

He tucked himself in and wiped off his hand, stumbling back from the windowsill. He leaned heavily on the wall and attempted to catch his breath. It didn't work. His body was still hot as hell, his breath was still ragged, and he couldn't close his eyes because he knew exactly what he would see.

Well, I'm fucked.

He had to go. Surprise visit be damned, Renji would still be captain the next time Ichigo would see him. If he could ever face him, that is. Shit. Rukia would beat him up, but he deserved that and so much more. His hollow was going to have a field day. If Renji wouldn't get to him first. Then there was his ego. Staying there, talking it out with Renji, apologizing - all would have probably been the honorable thing to do.

The notion of honor after what had just happened seemed ridiculous.

Ichigo hissed and decided to stop thinking about the consequences. He was never one for overthinking anyway, and for all he knew they could just ignore what happened and still be friends.

Only they couldn't.

Ichigo straightened up abruptly, and looked around the corridor. He did the only thing he could have done, and made his escape, looking forward to one long-ass night. Just great.


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childcage From: childcage Date: December 17th, 2009 02:16 pm (UTC) (Link)


Sexy. ♥

I actually would have added a comment sooner except I'm busy at work HELL YEAH READING PORN AT WORK I'M COOL
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 17th, 2009 02:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
*beams* Thank you very much! ♥

figaro_figaro From: figaro_figaro Date: December 17th, 2009 03:03 pm (UTC) (Link)
yip yip yip!

love it just as much as when i read it the first time(s). 8D
one of the hottest orgasms i've read in like forever. OMNOMNOM *goes back to read it again*
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 17th, 2009 03:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yesss, success is mine! 8D
Thank you for everything <3
beautifvl_flaw From: beautifvl_flaw Date: December 17th, 2009 04:16 pm (UTC) (Link)

You will be the death of me, I swear! Your awesome, sexy porn will kill me one day.

This was so wonderfully-almost-unbearably hot!
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 11:38 am (UTC) (Link)

Your icon <333333333333

B-but porn is supposed to bring people to life, not kill them! Hehe, that means I have the power of necromancy. *goes to work on canon!Renji's pride*

Uh, got carried away. Thank you for your comment! :D
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spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 11:44 am (UTC) (Link)
LOL, I'm touched to be related to that :P

Thank you for commenting! ^^
gwoman From: gwoman Date: December 17th, 2009 06:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
dear god YES!

spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 11:46 am (UTC) (Link)
*chuckles* Thank you! :DD
babyluw From: babyluw Date: December 17th, 2009 07:53 pm (UTC) (Link)

That was like....nice...
babyluw From: babyluw Date: December 17th, 2009 07:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
srly, Ichigo, walking in on that - Renji has to forgive him, it was a natural reaction, no one would be able to leave if they saw that.

I know I wouldn't...

And Renji, oh hell yes, I'm falling for him all over again <3 To hot for this world.
writerx75 From: writerx75 Date: December 18th, 2009 04:24 am (UTC) (Link)
I see all... ...you're not the only RHPS fan around here...

Well, there's nothing like getting yourself off in your new office to make it feel like it's yours! *looks around nervously* Uh, not that I'd know about that or anything...

Oh, Ichigo, you who have little control of your spirit energy, I really think that tasty redhead knew you were there the whole time. Why would he put on such a show, otherwise? I've got to say I enjoyed it, though...holy crap, Spiky, the delicious wealth of detail made me feel like I was standing right in the room with him. Of course, I think I'd be a little bolder than Ichigo and offer to help, but, well, it is a lot to see. Yum, yum! :D
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 12:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
... You just made me so happy someone got it :D

I think so too. I think there will be a Renji!POV.

Thanks a lot! ♥
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are_sensei From: are_sensei Date: December 18th, 2009 04:56 am (UTC) (Link)

Huzzah for Renji and his sex appeal. It is unavoidable.

Pure Renji porn, I loved it. When Renji started pulling his own hair I nearly died of bliss XD

Arigato gozaimasu!
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 01:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
Resistance is futile >D

Thanks a bunch!
From: lnasados Date: December 18th, 2009 05:17 am (UTC) (Link)
Tuyping with one hand while holding kleenes to nose and panting heavily. OMFG! Great Masterbating scene. Still fanning self. Bows deeply.
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 01:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
Why thank you ^^
saiyanzrepublik From: saiyanzrepublik Date: December 18th, 2009 06:40 am (UTC) (Link)
OMG amazing and hot as usual... fucking voyeur Ichigo watching Hot Renji jacking off is just too hot for words!! XD *fans self* woooooooot! :D Heheheh I love how you're portraying Ichigo as seeing Renji like is this way for the first time, it's always so interesting and hot to see a hot guy finding out that he has the hots for another hot guy, ya know?? :P *sigh* heh
saiyanzrepublik From: saiyanzrepublik Date: December 18th, 2009 06:41 am (UTC) (Link)
and oh god I forgot to add when Renji pulled his own hai... HOLY SHIT!! XD That has to be one of HOTTEST and SEXIEST thing Renji could do to himself... XD and of course it will be eve hotter if Ichigo was to pull his hair too... XD when it comes to Renji, it's so hard to NOT to be a perv, ya know??? :P
doxa_the_muffin From: doxa_the_muffin Date: December 18th, 2009 08:30 am (UTC) (Link)
Haori porn? Hair porn? Windowsills? One of the hottest pwps ever and UST-ish end? And fuck. I came. Four onces and a pint.
Just what I needed to make this day epic, even though it was supposed to be fail. ILU.
MOAR. I demand a sequel.
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 01:31 pm (UTC) (Link)



You just might get a sequel. Ichigo has all this new knowledge to put to use now >:D
goldensprite From: goldensprite Date: December 18th, 2009 11:28 am (UTC) (Link)


O_O I got your message and... blinked at it for a long while... wondering what... and then... I died... and went to porn heaven... [or is that, 'I came to porn heaven'? :p]

Fuck me, I can't even fucking think straight. But that's exactly what you fucking wanted, isn't it? To make me dead AND stoopid

Before I forget this in my porn haze, lemme just say I loved the first few paragraphs, where you gave us the background stuff. Short, simple, but SO effective, you read em and you're instantly all 'I know wat r happening'. Awesome. Woulda taken me several pages to get that much info across -_- Plus I LOVED the part about Abarai-taichou [fuck i love saying that] wanting to be far away from Aizen.

And you... you fiend... Did you get into my head and pick the shiniest things and scatter them throughout this fic? Cos... So many times I was just... eyes rolling back in my head from the sheer omygodyesitfeelssoright-ness of it. You... YOU! All those descriptions of Renji! Gaaaah... I can't help thinking of you cackling while you write, because you KNEW just how many times my fucking heart would be stopping from all the Renji hotness. omfg. That first description of him... I'm *such* a sucker for close-ups on Renji's neck. And you gave me so many ♥♥♥

Oh, right. Before I forget this in my RENJI'S WEARING A HAORI OMFG haze, I adored Ichigo in this! His little 'why can't I stop?' moments. Hahaha :)

Not to mention, when he puts his hand down his pants [WIN] I started thinking, 'please let Renji see him, please let Renji see him, please let Renji see him,' and then RENJI FUCKING SAW HIM and I practically leaped out of my chair XD

Fuck me, I'm so... so fucking *giddy*... I can't even focus on what I want to say to you... My mind keeps showing me pretty pretty pictures from this fic... I had to look away from my pc and *breathe* when Renji starts tugging at his haori as though he wasn't sure what to do with himself but couldn't care [what an awesome line, jesus fuck] AND THEN TUGS AT HIS HAIR oh gods oh gods... The noises Renji makes and he starts fucking his fist and squirming and writhing and gnnnhgnnnnngngngngng All the close-ups and details and fuck me...

I know I said no more long comments but I'm sure you know there's no way I coulda kept quiet about this one! I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT, and the fact that it was my fucking birthday present, for fuck's sake *whimpers* Too much awesome.


[one heart for each year I've been alive ;) which reminds me, i think this fic's shaved a few years off my total life-expectancy. guh...]
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 01:47 pm (UTC) (Link)


I don't think smilies can express my shit-eating grin and how fucking thrilled and touched and fluttery I feel at reading your comment. Though you can guess how happy I am you approve of this, as you started it all and and and nngh you I adore you ♥

So, yes. Don't ever stop with the long comments, they always make me keyboardsmash and beam for, like, hours 8D

HAPPY YESTERDAY BIRTHDAY ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥and many more :DDDD
sayu_chan From: sayu_chan Date: December 18th, 2009 11:29 am (UTC) (Link)
OMG, Awesome! So hooooooooooooooooooot~~~~~~

I love how Ichigo's conscience is shot to death (several times) by Renji absolute sexyness. The whole "I should g- omg, ksjhdnikberebrfhfuck hot!" had me nearly pitying the poor boy but alas...I am way too perverted to do that. XD

You do know, that this one screams for a sequel, yes?
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 18th, 2009 01:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you :D

LOL, I don't think he deserves pity for getting a show like that, the lucky bastard.

Why yes, I know ;)
cynoyonrae From: cynoyonrae Date: December 22nd, 2009 12:50 am (UTC) (Link)
HAHAHAHAHA. After I read this, I read all the comments, and I LAUGHED SO HARD. Because you guys are so .. swear-y, and just as I was thinking:
"Well, I don't think this person will appreciate me saying something to the effect of, 'THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT HOLY SHIT PUT OUT THE FUCKING FIRE!'", I'm pretty sure it'd actually be alright. o-o

... G- gah, jesus wow. I demand sequel, if there isn't already. OH my god. This is beyond fantastical.

I really loved everything about it. I actually choked a little when Renji saw him.. I almost had a happy heart attack!

Guh. Loved. @ @ ♥
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 23rd, 2009 04:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
Psssh, it's totally alright. Capslock and swearing is greatly appreciated :D

Thank you! :DDD
From: kagirinaifuyu Date: December 26th, 2009 10:01 am (UTC) (Link)

Oh god. Please tell me there will be a sequel! Ichigo definitely needs to get the guilt off his chest...
I'm sure Renji could help him with that (and his clothes too)!

Now, if you'll excuse me, I must go find my mind...
spikykun From: spikykun Date: December 26th, 2009 11:08 am (UTC) (Link)

I'm still working on it! ^^

Thank you very much for the comment :D
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